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My part of an art trade with :iconchikadee34: I drew one of her Naruto OCs Taro. Done by hand then scanned. Enjoy.

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The biggest, most obvious mistake you made here is drawing too dark. When you start a picture you should press on the pencil lightly instead of hard as you did here. Light lines are easier to erase and make for a cleaner finished piece. Darker lines come later, over a light sketch done so you know where you are placing the lines.

Your colouring seems a bit rushed and it's very obvious that you coloured in different directions. Slowing down your colouring and sticking to one direction would make it look much better. Patience is a great thing to have when drawing and I think your work would look much better if it showed some more patience.
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:iconchikadee34:
Yay! he looks so cute! thank you so much ^_^

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June 21
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HP Scanjet djf2200
Jun 21, 2009, 5:50:30 PM

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